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Written by Rae
July 08, 2010
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
Blog Review
| Good Points |
-Consistent writing for a possibly interesting story
-Option for new readers to read the blog from the first post to last
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| Bad Points |
-Not enough posts to really see where the story is going
-Distracting background
-Not enough updates |
| Would you recommend to a friend? |
Yes |
| Blog Review |
The blog, written by aspiring author Rae Lavalle,consists of posts that build up a single story. The tale itself tells of a boy going through an epic adventure, but it is still too soon to see where the plot takes itself. While the writing is consistent and holds the reader's attention, I wish there were more details to convey an image.
What I found especially helpful is that new readers have the option to read the blog-book from the first post down, as opposed to having to find the original chapter. Rae also has a section of terminology for a better understanding of her story.
The design of the blog seems a bit on the dark, suspenseful side. In my opinion, the vivid red background may be a bit distracting.
As for any suggestions, I'd like to see the blog updated on a more consistent basis, as it will show dedication. Looking at the inconsistency of scattered posts, I am left unsure whether the author will actually finish this blog, especially since I am bookmarking this site and did not ask for email updates of new posts. |
Owner's reply
Thanks very much for the kind and honest review of my blog! I have edited my site so the background is more mellow, hopefully this makes it less distracting. And thanks also for bookmarking it, I hope you enjoy the story as is progresses. I look forward to hearing your thoughts and opinions!
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