Ellaven
Written by Rae
July 08, 2010
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Blog Details
| Blog URL |
http://www.ellaven.wordpress.com |
| Description |
Scotland 1736-
Ben Kelly had his life planned to the very end. It was simple, humble, and it suited him just fine. He would find a wife, settle down, and help manage the Mackenzie farm where he has lived for as long as he can remember.
But his mother has hid a dark secret from her son for as long as she has been the widow Kelly. One that will inevitably keep Ben from the life he has planned, and lead him on an adventure no man could ever imagine. |
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Blog Review
| Good Points |
-Consistent writing for a possibly interesting story
-Option for new readers to read the blog from the first post to last
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| Bad Points |
-Not enough posts to really see where the story is going
-Distracting background
-Not enough updates |
| Would you recommend to a friend? |
Yes |
| Blog Review |
The blog, written by aspiring author Rae Lavalle,consists of posts that build up a single story. The tale itself tells of a boy going through an epic adventure, but it is still too soon to see where the plot takes itself. While the writing is consistent and holds the reader's attention, I wish there were more details to convey an image.
What I found especially helpful is that new readers have the option to read the blog-book from the first post down, as opposed to having to find the original chapter. Rae also has a section of terminology for a better understanding of her story.
The design of the blog seems a bit on the dark, suspenseful side. In my opinion, the vivid red background may be a bit distracting.
As for any suggestions, I'd like to see the blog updated on a more consistent basis, as it will show dedication. Looking at the inconsistency of scattered posts, I am left unsure whether the author will actually finish this blog, especially since I am bookmarking this site and did not ask for email updates of new posts. |
Owner's reply
Thanks very much for the kind and honest review of my blog! I have edited my site so the background is more mellow, hopefully this makes it less distracting. And thanks also for bookmarking it, I hope you enjoy the story as is progresses. I look forward to hearing your thoughts and opinions!
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